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Finding Eden chp.4

Chapter 4: A dream made flesh.   "Well did you boys have fun last night?" Leonardo asked, taking a seat next to Altair and Ezio at the table.  "It was Magnifico Leonardo!" Ezio exclaimed "Not to mention all those lovely women there too." He said smiling.  "Yes Leonardo it was pleasant." Altair said coolly.  "Ahh come on you old stiff don't be so humble I saw you eyeing one of the girls in there." Ezio said laughing.  Altair blushed a little; he would never admit he was looking at another woman outside of the one he loved.  "Hey isn't little descendent supposed to be showing up today?" Ezio asked, grabbi
Looks like Templar's and Assassin's have found a way to time travel and has taken the war to a whole new level. Desmond, Ezio and Altair now band together to protect what is dear. but Ezio has been plagued by a dream of him chasing a young woman who he does not know, and a voice of a woman in his ear telling him to protect her. Little does he know the coming of this dream marks another twist to this war...one that changes everything he and the rest of the assassin's thought they have come to know.

Originally called "Everything is real, Not all is permitted."

Rant of the Marry-Sues

Fri Dec 4, 2009, 12:04 AM
  • Mood: Rant
  • Listening to: Enchanted Moonlight- Lyriel
  • Reading: Working on my book
  • Playing: AC2 again!
  • Eating: cherries
  • Drinking: White tea
OOKAY!

I got a few notes stating that the young woman from my Assassin's Creed "finding Eden" is a Marry-sue. I asked what brought them to such a conclusion and it was simply because; 1.Her scares are not overly horrific, 2. Because she got knocked out first time meeting Ezio, and 3. She has a rough past....
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WTF! Seriously? I mean really? A female character now a day has to be fucking scared up the ass and have a bad attitude AND at the same time have a perfect fucking past? NOW DOESN'T THAT SOUND LIKE SHIT???? AND MAKES NO SENSE! I mean I hate the fact that almost everything under the sun makes your female character a god damn Marry-Sue! I feel like I make her the way I want her because no one will read because she is a "Marry-Sue" I mean she just entered the damn story give yourself time to read her and get to know her! And worse this is coming from a bunch of damn Twilight fan girls! Have you really looked at the characters from your own favorite book?? nough said on that.

To me and my friends a Marry-Sure is a character named Neko Chan, can shit rainbows, heal anything, cast any spell you can think of, has cat ears and tail, or something of the like and puts -kun at the end of EVERYTHING! is never sad.

Also for the record, any character acting abnormally brave when they weren't before, you would be surprised what revenge, love or the sheer will to see a wrong righted will do, it what makes the Hero the HERO!!!

okay I am done now....

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